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Sunday, November 4, 2007

OHIO STATE MURDERS, a play by Adrianne Kennedy

Ohio State Murders is a narrative monologue, told in a rarely changing monotone that builds with understated repressed suspense that requires total focus. Adrienne Kennedy has written it with the full intention that the drama dwells in your mind and imagination, a stylistic intellectual technique that tends to evolve in a static manner and limits or deadens true emotional catharsis.

It is given a full production with good actors, but it is essentially a one-act served up as a total evening’s entertainment, an irritant to a playgoer who forks out $75 a ticket and is on the street again in an hour.

The play utilizes characters who appear around the narrator, supposedly giving visualization and help in the telling of the story, but in actuality these actors essentially have little to do other than to walk around stiffly and say one or two insignificant lines. They could just as well be disposed of, and the storytelling could be offered entirely by the narrator who could sit on a stool or at or on a table.

The essential part of the story takes place in flashbacks to the 1950s. We’ve heard it before – intellectual white male literary professor in racist college takes advantage of black woman student who he deems is a writer of genius and who he eventually sacrifices for his own career and professional position (as well as guilt and shame), while she silently remains the puritanical, gentle, soul-suffering, struggling victim who is expelled from college yet must proceed with life even though destroyed. There are more specifics in the literature-focused story line than that, but the general theme is the inhumanity and violence of whites towards blacks and men towards women.

Why the white man kills the black babies one by one without killing the mother is another element left up to audience imagination. Nor is the white man drawn with a foreshadowing flaw, such as inherent frustration or failure, anger, jealousy, murderous or suicidal nature. Nor do we see one moment of real sexual attraction between man and woman – nor is it described, other than to hear that she goes to his room and in another sentence that she is pregnant. (The college grounds are meticulously described, pointing out invisible separations between black and white students.) We do not see the emotional pathos of a single woman left with baby twins or her struggle to care for or support them. What we see is a new mother entirely composed coming into a room carrying two babies and sitting in a chair. Most young mothers of twins are not so lucky as to be able to composedly sit in chairs for lengths of time. Assuredly, this play is not to be seen realistically, even though the author surely wants us to realistically relate to the theme.

Technically, we cannot make out the pictures of the slides that are thrown onto ceiling-high bookshelves -- no point in them anyway. The falling snow does not tell us much. The realistic set does nothing to enhance the storytelling.

The narrative words are supposedly what count in this play – you can become absorbed and, though the story is not new and does not project solutions, it does remind us of continuing major issues.
A FEMININE ENDING, a play by Sarah Treem


Sarah Treem, author of A Feminine Ending now playing at Playwrights Horizons in New York, has launched a theme dear to the hearts of many women but has constructed her play in such a surface and stereotypical manner that we merely watch it rather than empathize with deeply felt compassion.

The theme centers on conflicts of a modern young woman attempting to begin a career, in this case as a composer. Life interferes with pressures from earning a living, sexual desires, encountering marriage choices, the prospects of babies, and shouldering unresolved problems of parents.
She readily agrees to support boyfriend who is trying to make the grade as rock star by writing jingles for an advertising firm. He finally tells her each person must go it alone. Mother, absorbed in her own frustration (never fully delineated), lays her own problems on daughter. When father tells daughter to go ahead and write music, daughter cries out, "I haven’t got time!" Finally, daughter comes to the realization that women, in language and in actuality, have always been second and that it is her own fear of moving ahead that has encumbered her.

The confessional monologue method of characters speaking directly to the audience inspires unneeded words that do not really penetrate, and there is no real heightened dramatics in the dramatic scenes that makes us care. The characters are drawn so that we anticipate what they are to say. The subplot incident of the parent’s temporary broken marriage is not convincing, only confusingly unexplained. The ending, without a catharsis, again in monologue form, tells rather than moves us, and leaves us thinking "So what, who cares." It is unfortunate because this is an important theme that should be treated with depth of understanding.

The acting is overall adequate, though characters are never truly realized, except in one scene between mother and daughter. The direction includes smoothly wrought transitions for the most part, and the set is a bewildering mix of realism and stylized modern.
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